Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The debate whether sports and social activities deserve as much fund as the classes and library does has proven to be controversial. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of things should be taken into consideration in order to check a constructive and destructive facets of this issue. some people may hold the opinion that sports and social activities is paramount skills require for the individual, so its investing is must. However, other believe that it is not true and imply classes and library should be even more invested as it is require to enhance an academic skills of student. From my vantage point, I concur with the former group and aver that sports and social activities should given priority as academic one.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that sports and social activities can make person healthy. health is most important aspects in the human life; without it well condition, person may not feel themselves satisfy even surround with other materialistic pleasure. so a lot of investment by the different agency has been done for the health sector in order to be safe and healthy. As a sports and social activities both extract the people lethargic attitude to more salubrious one, these activities remains tantamount in significance to academic skills and sometimes much more demanding. one can relate with the fact that how health may be important to the person and these activities importance in modern life as they play role to maintain healthy situation within us. From the sports activities, people exercise their physical strength where they maintain their physical posture well whereas, from the social activities they can maintain their well mental condition as they may realize out their inner feeling which might cause depressing; on the other hand, they may learn how to interact with other people , share sorrow, laughter and talks and may become more engaging by lagging behind their loneliness. Since, social activities and sports brings joy and satisfaction in life of people, there is no question about its importance.
Another points that deserves some words to say is that social skills is paramount to become succesful in most of the profession. Right now, world is pace up with more business and competition is blatant in any sector. In fact, company have to cope with market management with good persuading skills; no matter how good their product or service than others,they have to lure their customer with good attracting skills with personal meeting or any other approach. By learning social activities, people can easily manipulate the person as they have well known to deal with others. In contrast, one, who weak in communication or social skills, trade very clumsily and people may not find his advice plausible. As a result, he/she have to stuck in the low profile job.
To sum up, contemplating all the above reasons, once can learn how important the social skills and sports for the individual personal development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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Message: Did you mean 'enhancing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, in contrast, in fact, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2511.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12448979592 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6501758354 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518367346939 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9520059746 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.157894737 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7894736842 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155412152706 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574081940191 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372248487003 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103001144046 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388161198887 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.