Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In universities, people tend to be concerned more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn. Some people propose that students should learn subjects with fast job growth, including science, technology, and engineering even if they are interested in other subjects.
First and foremost, students by getting involved in the materials they do not like, they feel bored and this will indeed decrease the efficiency of learning among them. It is a widespread fact among the scholars that when we engage in the commitments we yearning for, our brain secretes some enzimes which will increase the neuro activity in brain. As a result of this activity, we do not feel tired and it will boost productivity of ours. My personal experience is a good example of this. I remember my uncle David who was the fan of electrical course and in contrasts his brother Patrick had a long standing desire for being a cap. My grandmother coerced both to go to university and follow their lessons in the field of Electrical engineering. because of being reluctant in these courses, Patrick could not achieve any success and even the university expelled him. But the situation for David completely differed. He developed his skills in electrical field up to the point he could graduate with first place. Now,thanks to increasingly improve in his productivity, he is one of the prominents in my country and one of the most sought afters every corner of the globe. Had my grandmother did not compelled my uncle Patrick, he woule be one of the best caps in the city instead being as a prisoner because of over using alcohol.
Furthermore, when we commit in the courses we do not like, its evident result is nothing more then lacking job satisfaction. I see lots of my friend who have a high salary of the job they are doing, but they feel distressed or dejected. Not only they feel distressed of the career they possess, but also they have lots of the conflicts with their wives. When we inspect their lives, we understand that all of this turmoil come from lacking job satisfaction. The other day, I read an article about swede people. As you may know, the people who are living in sweden have high salaries and this country is the destination of lots of the people all of the world. Ther artciel was mentioning the high rate of suicide in Sweden. After some investigation the specialists recognized that this people because of scant of job satisfaction, and the behavioral consequences after that, they try to kill themselves.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only 63
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In universities people tend to be concerned more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn Some people propose that students should learn subjects with fast job growth including science tech 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In universities people tend to be concerned more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn Some people propose that students should learn subjects with fast job growth including science tech 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 748, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...in the field of Electrical engineering. because of being reluctant in these courses, Pa...
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Line 1, column 1017, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thanks
... he could graduate with first place. Now,thanks to increasingly improve in his producti...
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Line 1, column 1200, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'compel'
Suggestion: compel
...f the globe. Had my grandmother did not compelled my uncle Patrick, he woule be one of th...
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Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ike, its evident result is nothing more then lacking job satisfaction. I see lots of...
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Line 2, column 641, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s the destination of lots of the people all of the world. Ther artciel was mentioning the ...
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Line 2, column 780, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...igation the specialists recognized that this people because of scant of job satisfac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73120136222 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541025641026 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8510086522 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1578947368 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159309167934 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436198499671 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386971589632 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12075203696 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322848865524 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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