Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Video games offer benefits to children Provide reason and examples to support your stance

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “Video games offer benefits to children.” Provide reason and examples to support your stance.

“PUBG” is one of the most popular game applications, not only children are playing but also adults are into it. Some people think video games provide relief to their minds, but technically it’s not, moreover, it leads to mental fatigue. In my opinion, video game doesn’t offer benefits to children. I feel this way, which I will mention in the following essay.
Firstly, due to the upsurge of covid-19, the studies of children were adversely affected. Children have to study via online mode, which leads to an increase in screen time. After intense online classes, children like to play video games, which directly means screen time upsurge, which not only leads to mental fatigue but also waxes mental diseases like anxiety, depression, and sleeping disorder.
Secondly, video games involve violence, which is not acceptable in the real life. Children are too immature to make the right decision and because of video games, they try to imitate the game character’s behavior which is unhealthy for a child. For instance, a child is playing PUBG, a violent video game that is all about killing opponents and getting rewards and if the child lost, then it aroused the feeling of revenge and sometimes led to depression.
Additionally, Video games not only impair mental health but also physical health. Children like to play video games on a mobile phone like cricket, badminton, and many more than on the ground, which deteriorates their physical fitness.
In conclusion, Video game is a kind of addiction, once you start playing there is no place to go back. This makes children introverted. That’s why I disagree that video games offer benefits to children, they not only ruin their mental fitness but also affect their physical fitness, making the children feeble.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11301369863 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53684381904 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0668280869 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230694809849 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911757516091 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062883310609 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144093439001 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067512622005 0.0645574589148 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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