Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The way people dress is a good indication of his or her personality or character.
In my opinion the way people dress does not reveal their personality and we cannot appropriately judge them just by their outfit. I think this way for mainly two reasons.
First of all, the way people dress are affected by their culture, religion and the country where they live and not just by their attitudes. In some democratic country like Canada, people can wear whatever they want and choose their favorite wardrobe. However, governments in some countries such as Iran and Saudi Arabia have been enacting some strict laws for their people’s cloths particularly for women. According to the laws, the women must either obey them and wear hijab or go to prison. A survey conducted by women’s rights organization shows that more than half of the respondents do not agree with the laws and if they were allowed to choose their favorite wear they would not choose hijab.
Secondly, a psychological study showed that people have different viewpoint on life and it leads to have different priorities in their life. Indeed, some people look at their outfit as one of their crucial priorities and spend ample time and money on it, while others think garment is not an important subject in their life and they should spend their time and energy on noteworthy ones. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg, the founder and CEO of Facebook, wears same gray t-shirt and jeans every day. During an interview in 2014, he explained why his outfit never changed. “I have one less thing to decide, thus I save not only my valuable time but also my brain power for making a better decisions at my work.” said Zuckerberg.
In conclusion, people’s outfit is influenced by diverse factors and cannot correctly reflect their personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94137931034 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53470794214 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4469864771 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105435201034 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416457726296 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378903919719 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741788401731 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422909407725 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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