Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the way a person is dressed is a good indication of his personality or character?
Nowadays, there are many kinds of clothes for people to wear. Therefore, many claim that the clothes a person dressed are a clear indication of his personality. However, I am totally disagree with it. There are lots of conditions that people can not wear the clothing they like freely.
First, many individuals may has some strict dress code in specific setting, which makes his outfits irrelevant to his character. Students in china are a good cases in point. They always be forced to wear school uniforms when they at school. They could do nothing but obey the rules. If they do not obey the rules, they are very likely kicked out from the classroom to change the clothing that they are wearing. Hence, how can you figure out students personalities while they are in school uniforms?
Second, some kids are too young to choose their outfits. Young children barely could make any decision. It is obvious that they are so young as to think or speak. Kids just accept the food that their parents offer to them and the clothes their parents pick for them. For example, maybe a girl’s mom is in good mood today, she picks up a beautiful dress carefully, like a red dress, so the young girl has to wear the red dress. But if her mother is very tired, she is very likely to choose a outfit casually for her kid. As a result, we cannot tell the personality of the young girl.
Last but not the least, there are plenty person live in a place near the equator where is very hot all year round. In most cases, they have no choice but wearing skirts and slippers because of the extremely hot weather. It does not mean that they are always causal or not pay attention to their looking. The weather is so hot that they are not expected to wear suits or jeans. In their mind, it is more important that wear comfortable than look good. Accordingly, clothings are not representative people’s personalities.
There is no doubt that we live in a life of faster rhythm. Surely, we usually distinguish people from the first impression which probably is their looking. But obviously, as the three examples listed above, there is little connection between human outfits and their personalities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
... clothes for people to wear. Therefore, many claim that the clothes a person dressed are a...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... his personality. However, I am totally disagree with it. There are lots of conditions t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot wear the clothing they like freely. First, many individuals may has some str...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...n china are a good cases in point. They always be forced to wear school uniforms when the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies while they are in school uniforms? Second, some kids are too young to choos...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ery tired, she is very likely to choose a outfit casually for her kid. As a resul...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ell the personality of the young girl. Last but not the least, there are plenty...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'people', 'persons'?
Suggestion: people; persons
...ast but not the least, there are plenty person live in a place near the equator where ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sentative people's personalities. There is no doubt that we live in a life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, no doubt, as a result, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68831168831 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49888489214 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7479734263 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4230769231 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8076923077 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144369428898 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391769855337 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582238974014 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076937762342 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545510524043 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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