Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the way a person is dressed is a good indication of his personality or character?
Nowadays, there are many kind of clothes for people to wear. Therefore, many claim that the clothes a person dressed are a clear indication of his personality. However, I am totally disagree with it. There are lots of conditions that people can not wear the clothing they like freely.
First, many individuals may has some strict dress code in specific setting, which makes his outfits irrelevant to his character. Students in china are a good cases in point. They always be forced to wear school uniforms when they at school. They could do nothing but obey the rules. If they do not obey the rules, they are very likely kicked out from the classroom to change the clothing that they are wearing. Hence, how can you figure out students personalities while they are wearing school uniforms?
Second, some kids are too young to choose their outfits. Young children barely could make any decisions. It is obvious that they are so young as to think or speak. Kids just accept the food that their parents offer to them and the clothes their parents pick for them. Maybe their parents like red, so the young girl has to wear a red dress today.
Last but not the least, there are plenty person live in a place near the equator where is very hot all year round. They have no choice but wearing skirts and slippers. It does not mean that they are always causal or not pay attention to their looking. It is so hot that they are not expected to wear suits or jeans. Accordingly, clothings are not representive people’s personalities.
There is no doubt that we live in a life of faster rhythm. We usually distinguish people from the first impression that probably is their looking. But obviously, there is no connection between their outfits and their personalities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Nowadays, there are many kind of clothes for people to wear. Therefor...
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Nowadays, there are many kind of clothes for people to wear. Therefor...
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... clothes for people to wear. Therefore, many claim that the clothes a person dressed are a...
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... his personality. However, I am totally disagree with it. There are lots of conditions t...
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...ot wear the clothing they like freely. First, many individuals may has some str...
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...n china are a good cases in point. They always be forced to wear school uniforms when the...
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...hile they are wearing school uniforms? Second, some kids are too young to choos...
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...g girl has to wear a red dress today. Last but not the least, there are plenty...
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...ast but not the least, there are plenty person live in a place near the equator where ...
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...resentive people's personalities. There is no doubt that we live in a life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, while, as to, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73051948052 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48117172019 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548701298701 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.652763442 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.347826087 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3913043478 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119783685624 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351480027765 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058405931659 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641372490442 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060835475277 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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