people have a lot of opinions about the value of higher education. which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university?1.new experience 2.career preparation 3.increased knowledge
Nowadays more and more people want to receive higher education so that they are more likely to live better in the future. As far as I am concerned, new experience is the most important reason to go to college or university.
First of all, people could learn some social skills from their new experience. After entering college, people can meet new students and new teachers. In order to make more friends, they need to communicate with others a lot. Besides, people might have more chances to go on a trip with their friends than before. In this case, people know how to get along well with each other, since there are lots of differences among people. I am pretty sure that these social skills will help students a lot in their future career. Therefore, I think new experience is the most attractive reason to go to colleges or universities.
Second, career preparation is not suitable for everyone because the courses in the universities are very limited. Students just can only select one major or two majors. For example, a number of students will do all kinds of jobs which are not related to the things that they learned from universities. Thus, how students get benefits from universities for their careers? On the contrary, new experience is open to everybody. As long as students get in universities, it is obvious that they could find something new. Accordingly, new experience is the much more important reason for students to enter university than career preparation.
Finally, there is no doubt that a little knowledge which people learned from universities might be so abstract and not practical. For instance, people do not really need physics and chemistry in their life. In contrast, people obtain their new experience from their daily life, it is real life experience which can be used in the future extremely frequently. As a result, new experience is the first reason about why people should attend universities.
As the three reasons mentioned above, it is clear to draw the conclusion that new experience the most important reason for people to go the universities and colleges because people can get many benefits from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of students will do all kinds of jobs which are not related to the things...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, finally, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98342541436 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73382425573 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4689350203 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9047619048 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343535632452 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10720830586 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752974065748 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200745839032 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291680637942 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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