Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Colleges should require freshman students to take a class on how to study in college.
As far as I am concerned, freshman students are not supposed to take a class on how to study in college.
First, freshman students do not have enough time to take this kind of class. As we know students are extremely busy everyday, especially freshman students have to take more classes than other students. When I was a freshman student, I need to take various classes from 8 o’clock in the morning to 9 o’clock in the evening, which makes me really tired and stressed out. Basically, I do not have much spare time to take a break. If I am forced to take this class, I may not be happy and I will not listen to the teacher carefully. Even worse, I probably fall asleep during the class. As a resualt, I can learn nothing from the class. However, I am more exhausted than before. Thus, this class is unnecessary for freshman students.
Second, besides the class, freshman students can know about how to study in college in other ways. For example, they are able to ask professors or senior and junior students for help. Because these people have been colleges for several years, they comprehend the colleges very well. Moreover, since the development of internet, freshman students also can search some information on the internet. There are plenty of people share their experience on their social media. Therefore, requring freshman students to take a class to learn how to study in college is not a good idea.
Third, the class is not suitable for every student is another reason why I disagree with the statement. There is no doubt that everyone is unique. Since every freshman student might meet different problems, not every student can be benefical from this class. For example, I did not know how to manage time at my spare time when I was a freshman student. In contrast, my roomate janis had a difficulty in taking notes during the class. Accordingly, joining a class does not really teach freshman students about how to study in college.
As the three reasons mentioned above, it is easy to draw the conclusion that in order to understand how to study in college, asking freshman students to take a class is not a best solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, joining a class does not really teach freshman students about how to study in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in college, asking freshman students to take a class is not a best solution.
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Line 17, column 175, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...eshman students to take a class is not a best solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, third, thus, well, for example, in contrast, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75331564987 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58473875216 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488063660477 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8352485909 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9130434783 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3913043478 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78260869565 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41755631734 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131547769062 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102889540035 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277358892678 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440876972781 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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