In order to succeed in doing a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than the excellent knowledge of this job.
Everyone wants to do a good job in their career. Many claim that it is more important to have great knowledge of the job than adapt to the new environment quickly for them to get succeed when facing a new job. However, I am the opposite of this opinion. From my perspective, I think being success has much to do with the adaptation to new new environment.
First of all, people could get higher salary if they are good at adapting. As people having a good relation with their colleagues they will probably have some leads which are important for their jobs. For example, I am a outgoing girl and I usually like to help my co-works to do some extra work. Therefore, we become friend after a short time and I also have a fine networking. Once I resigned my job because I am very tired and I want to find new job which is more relaxed. Fortunately, I got a internal referral from my boss of another company. Thanks to him I am very happy to get this new job and also my salary is much higher. How to get along with others is an indispensable class that can not be learned from the classes.
In addition, people could get promotion because of their adaptation. They can plan a typical day easily like dealing with paperwork, sending emails, holding an interview and stuff like that. When a people come to a new company, they will take a long time to get used to it. So it is very hard for them to finish their work efficiently. But if someone can finish work quickly and well before the deadline, he is more likely to catch the eye of some important leaders and then he might a promotion in the near future.
Last but not the least, people can also have some opportunities to get the oversea job openings. Nowadays, the world changes so frequently. There is no doubt that it is hard for people to change the world but we can try our best to adapt it. One of the most challenge things for us when we work overseas is the different food.We have no choice but try to get used to it even it awful to eat. How can we focus on our job if we can not eat so many food that we do not like actually? Besides, it will help us a lot if we can easily involved in the culture of the new company. Because the culture is the basis and idea of a company. Although there are lots of differences between China and foreign countries, we can do a better job as long as we can absorb their culture.
Even though knowledge can also help us to work well, it is not as important as adaptation. Moreover, we can learn more knowledge no matter when and where. But we can not learn the ability to get used to a new environment quickly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many claims'.
Suggestion: Many claims
...wants to do a good job in their career. Many claim that it is more important to have great...
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Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: new
...s has much to do with the adaptation to new new environment. First of all, people...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he adaptation to new new environment. First of all, people could get higher sa...
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Line 2, column 224, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rtant for their jobs. For example, I am a outgoing girl and I usually like to hel...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ich is more relaxed. Fortunately, I got a internal referral from my boss of anoth...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t can not be learned from the classes. In addition, people could get promotion ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...might a promotion in the near future. Last but not the least, people can also ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
... we work overseas is the different food.We have no choice but try to get used to i...
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Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...e focus on our job if we can not eat so many food that we do not like actually? Besi...
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Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much food', 'a good deal of food'.
Suggestion: much food; a good deal of food
...e focus on our job if we can not eat so many food that we do not like actually? Besides, ...
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Line 4, column 534, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'involve'
Suggestion: involve
... it will help us a lot if we can easily involved in the culture of the new company. Beca...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s long as we can absorb their culture. Even though knowledge can also help us t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23694779116 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43868702381 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439759036145 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.639596445 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3571428571 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262479074418 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751791380761 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104248960981 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191602013185 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165598973656 0.0645574589148 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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