In order to succeed in doing a new job, the ability to adapt oineself to the new environment is more important than the excellent knowledge of this job.
Whether the ability to adapt to a new environment is important in order to be successful in a job raises a heated debate. Some people agree with the statement, while others argue that having an excellent knowledge of the job is more essential. For me, I fully agree with the statement. My reasons are as follows.
To begin with, in order to succeed in a career, one must become efficient in their work, and apparently, having the skill to accommodate to a new environment can increase a person's working efficiency. As an example, my friend, Todd, was an extremely adaptive person. When he became an RA at National Taiwan University, he learned how to use Tensorflow, a Python machine learning framework, in less than 3 days. Also, he had the ability to quickly learn Python within two weeks. As a result, he could usually complete his research missions in no more than three hours every day. On the other hand, my friend, Jane, learned how to use Excel from college. Yet, when she joined An-Hua Technological FIrm, Jane's supervisor required her to use Numpy, a Python library, to analyze data. Unfortunately, Jane did not have the ability to acquire new skills, so it took her more than 5 months merely learning that Python library. Evidently, having the skill to fastly adapt to new tasks can substantially improve one's working efficiency.
In addition, befriending lots of people is a necessary factor to become successful in one's career, and having the ability to adapt quickly to the new surroundings can help people make a significant number of friends and become successful. Take me as an example. I was an adaptive person, so when I got a career at Aidea Technological Company, an artificial intelligence company. Since I know how to quickly adapt to a new surrounding, I become familiar with the office slangs and culture quickly. Thus, I became familiar with my colleagues in less than a month, so when I faced some problems with my AI model, my coworkers often help me out spontaneously. Also, my colleague frequently praised me in from of my supervisors, so I got promoted just after one years of working. Contrarily, my sister was not proficient at making new friends in a new environment, so even though my sister worked at her financial firm for more than three years, most of her colleagues still treated my sister as an outsiders. She did not get any help when she did not know which model should be used to analyze customer's behaviors, not did she get promoted. So according to the examples mentioned above, having the ability to make new friends in a new environment is exceptionally vital.
In conclusion, I maintain that having the ability to get accustomed to the new environment is exceptionally vital to a person's success due to the aforementioned reasons.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether the ability to adapt to a new environme...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...odate to a new environment can increase a persons working efficiency. As an example, my f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ecessary factor to become successful in ones career, and having the ability to adapt...
^^^^
Line 5, column 754, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one year', 'a year', or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: one year; a year; years
...pervisors, so I got promoted just after one years of working. Contrarily, my sister was n...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 992, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an outsider' or simply 'outsiders'?
Suggestion: an outsider; outsiders
...r colleagues still treated my sister as an outsiders. She did not get any help when she did ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...environment is exceptionally vital to a persons success due to the aforementioned reaso...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84696016771 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9410181103 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501048218029 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3716434973 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.52173913 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258140317305 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775836401667 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888045614569 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185076048327 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759807355185 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether the ability to adapt to a new environme...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...odate to a new environment can increase a persons working efficiency. As an example, my f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ecessary factor to become successful in ones career, and having the ability to adapt...
^^^^
Line 5, column 754, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one year', 'a year', or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: one year; a year; years
...pervisors, so I got promoted just after one years of working. Contrarily, my sister was n...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 992, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an outsider' or simply 'outsiders'?
Suggestion: an outsider; outsiders
...r colleagues still treated my sister as an outsiders. She did not get any help when she did ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...environment is exceptionally vital to a persons success due to the aforementioned reaso...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84696016771 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9410181103 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501048218029 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3716434973 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.52173913 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258140317305 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775836401667 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888045614569 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185076048327 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759807355185 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.