Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The way a person dresses reflects his/her characters.
Do you agree or disagree: The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character.
In modern times, there is a trend that women are more and more crazy about makeup. They believe that a good looking face is the most important for a woman. It will give a good impression on others. But they forget that under their skins nothing changes. I think this also goes with the way people dress. As the old saying goes: “Never judge a person by his or her appearance.”
Do you think that your personality has changed a lot since you are an adult? What about your dress? When people are at college, they dress cheap, casual clothes. After graduation, when they get a job, they wear a suit. The style of their dress has changed a lot. But has their personality changed as much as their clothes? Based on my experience, it is hard to change a person’s mind. If it is that easy, then there are no more lazybones.
However, the way people dress in deed indicates their social status. It is fairly easy to identify a student in the crowd based on the clothes he or she wears. From the suit a person wears, we can infer what job the person does. For example, we know what a doctor looks like because doctors wear white gowns. As for the example in the second paragraph, the change of the way peple dress suggests that their social status changes from a student to a worker.
Meanwhile, the way people dress shows that how many resources they have. As mentioned above, college students tend to wear cheap clothes. that is because they do not have a stable job and cannot afford expensive clothes. After graduation, they get a job and start to make money, so they can buy expensive and fancy clothes. As we know, we buy clothes with money, so clothes are an indication of wealth.
Some may argue that the style people dress is an indication of taste, which in some way reflects people’s personality. Admittedly, I believe that the former part is right. If a woman often wears red clothes, it means that she likes the red colour. But I don’t think that we can conclude that she is sanguine or optimistic. Maybe she just wants to catch men’s attention. Or maybe she is depressed. The reason why she often wears red clothes is that she believes that the red colour can cheer herself up. From the way she dresses and the price of the clothes, we can guess her social status and how much resources she holds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... we can guess her social status and how much resources she holds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, while, as for, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55079006772 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47275715996 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480812641084 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2874151018 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.84375 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212341633401 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538852399455 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856274052828 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151837564103 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125171312717 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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