We are almost always faced with problems, small or large, at a company, regional, or global level. We often work as individual or group to solve many of these daily challenges. Working as individual or group has advantages and disadvantages and is often suitable for certain stages of a project or task. However, I tend to agree that working as a group results in better solutions.
First, as a group, we can each present our ideas then debate and come to a conclusion. One person may come up with one or two solutions. A group of individuals can come up with different ideas and solutions. Through group work, ideas can be discussed and expanded, or used to support one another and to come up with a solution that deems superior or addresses all potential shortcomings. Knowledge and skills of a group can also be used to strengthen a solution. For example, if we work in a software company, there are teams for every project. Every member in the team works toward the same goal, they come up with different solutions, and they can get a good solution for project.
Second, each problem is complex and therefore requires knowledge and skills of different sectors to resolve. No single person is equipped to understand in-depth all technical areas. A group of people coming from different background thus can offer a complex set of expertise to deal with an issue. For example, in the last semester, we had several project assignments, which required us to work as a group. I brought my mathematical expertise to the group. Some of my group members brought in their economics theory and understanding, while others contributed to the project using their strong English language skills. As a result, our projects were highly evaluated.
In summary, based on the above statements, we can conclude that teamwork is better than work individually.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reaso 63
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92332268371 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82921013231 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.505764036 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1052631579 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223196991215 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069551321254 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530331048568 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116467658886 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556374253242 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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