The world is getting smaller. With the development of advance transportation systems, people can move easily from one place to another around the world. Some people spend all of their life in one place, because they enjoy a strong, tight relationship with their neighbors and communities. Some live a somewhat transient life because of work requirement or because the prefer to experience different places and cultures. I prefer to move places to places throughout my life.
First, I like to travel to find more work opportunities. I am from Vietnam where there aren’t many good job opportunities for recent college graduates. Many graduate students have to find job in different industries that they weren’t trained for. Others often have to wait for years to get a job. After spending several years in school, I would like to be able to apply my knowledge and skills in a job I like and in an environment that fosters further development.
Second, living in different places gives us a chance to experience new cultures. It always excites me to meet people of different background, those who speak different languages, eat different foods, and play different type of music. Living in a new place would also challenge my adaptability and make me become more understanding of the world I live in. This will ultimately make me become a better person.
Third, I like to travel and live in difference places because the world is so diverse, so beautiful and has so many things to offer. I always dream to see the Golden Gate Bridge and the San Francisco Bay area. I also like to see the Louvre in France, the site of Berlin Wall in Germany that marks a significant conflict in history. I also would like to climb the mountain tops of the Himalaya or the sand dunes of the desert in Sub-Saharan Africa.
I have an uncle who travels many places for work who has influenced my desired to travel and explore the world.
The choice between staying in one place and moving depends on individuals. My dream is being able to live, work, and travel places.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reaso 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... because of work requirement or because the prefer to experience different places and cult...
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Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arks a significant conflict in history. I also would like to climb the mountain t...
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Line 7, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es of the desert in Sub-Saharan Africa. I have an uncle who travels many places ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the desert in Sub-Saharan Africa. I have an uncle who travels many places f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 30.3222958057 191% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 355.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83098591549 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75679535887 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52676056338 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5366185534 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61904761905 7.06452816374 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275932054224 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853111033005 0.0996497079465 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963230122876 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139219195816 0.162205337803 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111177451369 0.0443174109184 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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