The question of teamwork versus working independently is an old one. There are some tasks that need a group of people to work together in order to accomplish a common goal. A city cannot be planned and developed by a single person. However, there are a few problems that could get worse when multiple people try to work on it. For example, choosing a car is an intricately personal decision and needs to be decided by the person looking to buy it. It cannot be decided by a group as every individual has their own taste and past experiences which will different that the person who wants to buy it,
So, whether a group comes up with a better solution or an individual, depends on the problem at hand.
To elaborate the concept of group work, consider the case of city planning discussed above. Not only is this an enormous task, but also very difficult and time consuming. A single person cannot possibly comprehend the nature of the ask and it would be impossible to even come up with a mediocre solution, less an ideal one. Such a task would require a special force of people skilled and experienced in the many facets of the problem. With their combined and complementary and dedicated efforts, a solution can be drafted. This would need to be critically analysed, shortcomings would have to be found. Amends will have to be made and only after careful and precise execution, a solution would be found.
On the contrary, consider the above mentioned problem of buying a car. There is a chance that it would not be beneficial to work in a group. Even a discussion among a group will result in too many opinions, each based on the individual person's bias, and taste. This is just confuse the buyer and throw him haywire. Best approach here would be to research the cars individually and buy whatever the person wants.
Finally, there are a few problems that don't have a clear winner in deciding between group effort or individual efforts. Lets consider studying for the exams. Some students prefer studying alone as compared to a group as they don't want to wait on their preparation till the entire group finishes. Learning in a group may hamper the progress of a very fast learner. On the other hand, a few students prefer to learn and study in groups. Every person can learn a few topics themselves and then disseminate the knowledge to others. This speeds up the learning and also teaches the group the most important things learned by the group. In the end, it all comes down to what the student himself prefers and there is no better solution to this problem.
Thus, people solving problems together may not always be the best solution. It depends on the problem at hand, and also on choice and preference of the people involved.
- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why? 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solution that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is differnt from you. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 525, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...very individual has their own taste and past experiences which will different that the person wh...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...annot possibly comprehend the nature of the ask and it would be impossible to even come...
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Line 6, column 316, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
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Line 8, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, so, then, thus, for example, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67010309278 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54957937301 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492783505155 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3602539605 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8928571429 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3214285714 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82142857143 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18320264117 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489272649781 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496989472497 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120074386538 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067437503255 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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