Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
It is known that youngsters play an ineffable role in our society because they have an active voice in different fields and great commitment with their beliefs. I completely disagree with the statement that nowadays young persons have no influence on the important decisions that affect society. I feel this way for the reasons I will present in the next paragraphs.
Firstly, Young people are able to vote in most of countries around the world. I believe that voting is a powerful way to make a difference and change the course of our society locally and nationally. If youngsters understand the power of vote, they can do this more consciously and the positive impacts of this decision will be enhanced.
Secondly, besides voting young people are able to be voted. When we have youngsters as politicians or in other leadership positions it means that they can actively participate of decision taking and not only influence them. Furthermore, they can use their proactive skills when they are in these leadership positions.
Finally, youngsters have the excellent ability to express their beliefs and defend them passionately. They can express their opinions and beliefs through pacific demonstrations in order to try to change some previous decision made. For example, in my university student's demonstrations were able to change a new policy previously stablished, because it was negatively impacting student’s routine. On the other hand, if students had not claimed for changes it could have not occurred.
To sum up, I strongly oppose the idea that young people have no influence on decision taking in our society. This is because they are proactive, able to express their beliefs and convince others, besides they are able to vote and to be voted which is the worldwide main process through which leaders and people can impact the future of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...rstly, Young people are able to vote in most of countries around the world. I believe that voting...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sion made. For example, in my university students demonstrations were able to cha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78331463797 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5745318415 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207494789905 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079470308027 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985184676717 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12380311391 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713924680549 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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