Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Social communities are of great importance in every society, which bring diverse characteristic to the whole country. These communities are mostly depend on the young people contribution. As far as hepling juveniles to these communities is concerned, some are of the opinion that these days young people do not devote enough time for these puposes as they did in the past while others believe otherwise. I-for one- subscribe on the first idea on the ground that time has been changed and people do not much time for side activities, also nowadays moral issues are of lesser importance in eyes of folk, and there are many other leisure activities that people can enjoy.
First and foremost, in the hectic life of this modern era everyone has to keep the pace of galloping development of society. To be more specific, people need to work hard for a better living and they are more workaholic than they used to be. Besides, they have to obtain more skills and be more sophisticated for their career, so they make furtune. For instance, attending school and aquiring knowledge is mandatory for a young man to find a decent career for his future, although his ancestor could easily choose their father job.
Second, exercising moral activities is not that consequential anymore. developing world brings some life-changing invention which affect people especially the young ones greatly. For example, social media has changed many attitudes toward life. Rich people show off their luxurious living habits which juveniles find very attractive and want to reach them more than anything in life. In this environment there is no room for charity works and helping other people.
Last but not least, leisure activities are much more than old days. For example, people can do variet of sports with all kind of facilities, they could play video games, go to a thrilling trip much more easier than it was in the past and etc. Having micellaneous options to enjoy the life instantaneously, young people do not have the intention to think about the attending communities.
Finally, with all this taken into account, I believe that young men and women do not help the communities of the society because they are extremely busy with their own issues, do not care enough about the charity works, and have so many entertainments which they can enjoy. Therefore, I think it is crucial for every country that their authotities take immediate measures to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...e country. These communities are mostly depend on the young people contribution. As fa...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Developing
...ties is not that consequential anymore. developing world brings some life-changing inventi...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ideo games, go to a thrilling trip much more easier than it was in the past and etc. Having...
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Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...uch more easier than it was in the past and etc. Having micellaneous options to enjoy th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00488997555 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64154876981 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540342298289 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2155750418 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.722222222 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197962432558 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605802260716 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572695331564 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119479461283 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602858268237 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.