Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
Nowadays, the whole society is more concerned about the issue as to young people than ever, for the youngsters is a crucial part in the current society. Thus, almost everyone is engaged in the heated discussion over young people's behaviors. Quite a few, if not the majority, believe that young people give enough time to helping their communities, while in contrast, I consider that the youngsters actually do not spend enough time on communities.
First, with the unprecedented pressure existed in the society, young people have to work and study hardly. They spend almost all time on their career or learning, through which they could make a live. In contrast, helping their communities seems to be not a much important thing. Under this circumstances, young people would not spend much time on favoring their neighborhoods. Take my own experience for an example. I have already entered into a university. Every day, I face to a lot of tasks and assignments, and seldom is having a rest in my spare time, let alone helping communities. Thus, I suppose that, currently, young people do not give enough time for communities.
Furthermore, there are a wide variety of entertainments and recreational activities, which are appealing to young people than helping communities. No doubt that current youngsters have to find approaches to keep a balance between working and relaxation, they could be energetic when they found a proper way to ease off. However, helping communities is not a desirable way to relax, which even make young people feel more exhausted; thus, once youngsters have spare time, they would like to see a movie or do yoga in order to unwind themselves. A quintessential example would be myself. I would like to read a book or watch television during the weekends or vocation rather than helping out communities.
Granted, some believe that young people assist their communities from time to time, which is also reasonable to some extent. For example, there are some students who do volunteer works in their community in the summer or winter vocation. However, these students, if not the majority, just help their communities in order to meet the school’s the requirement, helping and supporting communities. Once they finish their task, they would not do such a favor again. It is clear that such a temporary assistant is not lasting. Therefore, technically, young people actually do not spend enough time on assistance for communities.
In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the aforementioned statement, I shall maintain that, presently, young people do not give enough time to help their communities.
Granted, some believe that the way people dress is not a good indicator of his or her personality and characters, which is also reasonable to some extent. For instance, a pretty girl who looks like a social animal may be a shy person. However, one person could have different character, showing themselves diversely according to the various situation. Even though sometimes the people's appearance is not associated with their the most obvious character, the style of the clothes is still the part of, maybe very tiny, their real quality. Hence, I still consider that the way people dresses impress themselves.
In conclusion, after the thoroughly analysis of the aforementioned statement, I shall maintain that the way people dress is a good indicate of their personality and characters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...have different styles. When it comes to the question whether the way people dress is a good indicati...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'seen'.
Suggestion: seen
...alking in public or stranger and I have saw her wearing common T-shirt and long jea...
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Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...us situation. Even though sometimes the peoples appearance is not associated with their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1252900232 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82062055646 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45939675174 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8891501206 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.36 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.24 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.24 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271701106305 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919074760581 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955167674033 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198701640829 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524274942616 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.