Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people argue that youngsters are less able to make important decisions related to the future of society. However, I believe that youths have a sense of responsibility and a helping and caring society as opposed to another stratum of society. I feel this way for two rationales which I can elaborate upon hereunto.
To begin with, given the fact that youths are the people who could be an expert and full of energy in the future society. Besides, young people are the voice of society in various aspects of issues, in turn, by using their powerful thoughts society might be changed into better. For instance, when governments are recruit young people, it engages them in society and would be highly beneficial for them. In other words, youngsters might be less experienced, but they could get advice from the oldest people who are proficient and using older's experiences so as to they can carry out the projects in the long run. Therefore, youths are the most important stratum of society to make a decision on important factors.
Furthermore, youngsters have a massive hold on social media to support and refute the ideas of government. The fact is young people are able to use and work with social media which is overrides the importance of anything else. To prove this I have an example in my personal life. When I was working in a company after graduation, the manager seeks volunteers to work in another branch of the company which was held in a tropical region. Among all the employees, the youths only had desired to move to that area. notwithstanding the fact that they might be deprived of some facilities, but they were looking for undertake great responsibilities. That is why those young people could promote the future of that company by the sacrificing activity they have done.
All in all, by taking all the points into account, I vehemently assure that the involvement of youngsters in problems has far-reaching effects on the future of society. Not only they can aggregate others for social problems through campaigns but also they can respond through social organizations and social media to determine the drastic decisions concerning society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...proficient and using olders experiences so as to they can carry out the projects in the ...
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Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Notwithstanding
... only had desired to move to that area. notwithstanding the fact that they might be deprived of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i feel, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96438356164 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73736336481 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506849315068 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9598503728 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.588235294 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185464058462 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641279503025 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517110608282 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109426128569 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446266370501 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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