Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people
nowadays do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past.
Throughout history, human being's lives have changed enormously since the have a tendency to improve their lives. Education would be an essential factor having remarkable effects on young people's lives. While some people believe that, nowadays, young people do not respect their teacher like the past, others hold exactly opposite viewpoint. In no way could I agree with the latter idea. There are some reasons, the most important of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, so important has the technology been that it has had a great number of positive and negative effects on people's lives from around the world, yet above all, it has detached students from their teachers since they are able to increase their knowledge via the internet. In fact, in the past, young people relied on their teachers more because they were just well-educated teacher around them, and young had to respect them. To illustrate this fact, one needs only refer to numerous websites which enroll student for online course. For example, last summer, there were no open school, I wanted to spend my time on a practical topic, and thereby, with the assisting of the internet, I could learn how to paint others faces. I do believe that had I not used the internet, I could have not increase my knowledge in painting. As a result, technology especially the internet provide an opportunity for young people to learn something by themselves resulting in they do not respects their teachers.
The second debatable point is that, one the one hand, some people believe that children are so impolite and they just think about themselves, and do not listen to their parents advices, yet on the other hand, some people are convinced that parents do not have enough time to speaker their children in order to teach them how to behave with their teachers. As a matter of fact, they spend most of their time in the working environments. Hence, I strongly agree with the latter idea, for I do believe that the more people spend their time in their office, the more their children would be impolite person. The noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our country, show that approximately 90 percentage of student who are fired from school due to being impolite, are the ones who their parents tight schedules.
To make a long story short, nowadays, young people do not respect their teachers like the past. Due to the progression of technology, they are experiencing more independent life because they are able to solve their problem by turning on the internet. For this reason, I highly recommend that parent allocate more time to forming of their children in a good way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: A_GREAT_NUMBER_OF_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'positives'?
Suggestion: positives
... been that it has had a great number of positive and negative effects on peoples lives f...
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Line 2, column 798, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...not used the internet, I could have not increase my knowledge in painting. As a result, ...
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Line 2, column 979, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'respect'?
Suggestion: respect
... by themselves resulting in they do not respects their teachers. The second debatable p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92256637168 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52461742131 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480088495575 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2150071343 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.611111111 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289830269551 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102419261317 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843207610686 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200147512824 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232534063987 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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