Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A university education is essential to success in life.
Most people want to become successful in their life, and they may achieve this in different ways. Personally, I believe that it is extremely beneficial to go to university and receive a higher degree to live successfully. I feel this way for two reasons, and in what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
First, going to university will increase the chance of getting a well-paid job. Not only will firms and companies hire university educated people more, but they also promote them more easily. The courses that are taught in universities can provide lots of key information and practical knowledge about a specific field for students. For instance, I remember an article I read in a newspaper some years ago that claimed the possibility of getting hired for college and university graduates is much higher than high-school graduates.
The second reason involves the social aspect. While having lots of money and a satisfying job is an essential parameter for having a successful life, spirituality is also very crucial. The students who attend university will face people from all over the world who have different cultures and specific attitudes and coming in contact with them can usually give profound wisdom and the ability to deal with people. Students who are equipped with this tool can be more successful in social relations and certainly can have a happier life. For example, I have a brother who studies at university, and he is quite skillful in establishing rapport with other people, and everyone knows him as a friendly person. On the other hand, my cousin, who is the same age as my brother does not go to university. He is a kind person, but he cannot communicate with others, so many people know him as a shy person.
From what has been discussed above, university education is essential for everybody because they will have a higher chance of getting hired and establishing better social relationships.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'firm'
Suggestion: firm
... getting a well-paid job. Not only will firms and companies hire university educated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0092879257 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81670458649 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569659442724 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0137017481 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164757520618 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535830860337 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383146226418 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097919373148 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189653657947 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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