Colleges and Universities are the backbones of a nation. Those are also very important parts of any student's life because the success of any individual student depends on how much useful effort they had given in their college or university life. If universities and colleges treat sports and social activities as important as classes and libraries, some people I'm sure would believe that it is a great idea and others would disagree. In my view, those are not as important as classes and libraries and should not get equal financial support for the following reasons.
The main reason is that providing equal financial support will cost a lot of money and which is unnecessary. An academic institution is not a place to practice sports or any social activities. It's the only suitable for study and research. As a result, it is unnecessary things and cost a great deal of money to support sports and social activities. For example, when I was in university, I used to play football regularly. I used to be an active member of a sports organization at my university. The name of my organization was "Black". There I had a good relationship with the president, as because he was my departmental senior. I come to know from him that he earns a lot of money by running this organization and that money came from the university fund which he did not spend all of them for the organization. I also saw that my classmates who were involved in sports or other social activities did poor result in the exam. And eventually, they are now struggling in their personal life as because of their poor result didn't help them much to get a better job. As you can see, this financial support was unnecessary as because it did not help the students in their future life. And spending that money for the academic purpose rather than sport or culture will be more helpful for the students of the institution.
Another reason is that supporting sports and social activities will hamper institution environments as a place for study and research. Sports and cultural activities in an institution will create a lot of noise and increase traffic congestion in that area. And the students of that institution will suffer from distraction while studying and may these disturbance inhibits them to acquire their desired result. For instance, when I was a university student, in my second year, our vice chancellor was changed. The newly appointed Chancellor was very fond of sports and other social activities. During his time he funded a lot of money for other activities such as sports, cultures, and others. As a result, soon our campus become more crowded than ever before, a lot of cultural and social activity started to bloom. Sometimes it was hard to concentrate in the library and classes as because some other cultural activity was creating a lot of sounds. And eventually, in that year 20 percents students were failed to pass in their departmental course which was unprecedented for the last 10 years. This experience taught me that supporting sports and social activities are detrimental to the institution's academic environments.
In sum, though some may support the plan to provide financial help for sports and social activities at universities and colleges. It will not only cost a lot of unnecessary money but also pollutes the academic environment of an institution. Every universites and colleges should spend money only for academic purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Message: Did you mean 'this disturbance' or 'these disturbances'?
Suggestion: this disturbance; these disturbances
...from distraction while studying and may these disturbance inhibits them to acquire their desired ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2874.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 580.0 407.700716846 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95517241379 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92654625939 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425862068966 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 919.8 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8292757946 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23892581136 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715445668767 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738716144956 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17179953113 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433248064934 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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