Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the idea that at universities, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive an equal amount of financial support.
First of all, universities and college are places of diversity where all kinds of interests should be allowed, respected, and considered as equal to help cultivate students' interests and values. When I studied at Harvard University, all kinds of extracurricular activities were sponsored by the school. For example, members of basketball team could train with the latest equipment worth 500 dollars; whereas, students in the Chinese literature study group were able to spend about the same amount of money to host a conference for freshmen. Therefore, people of different group know that the school would never value more on any other group among the campus and support varieties of hobbies and interests of individuals.
Second, it's the universities' job to cultivate and identify talents among all domains. For example, the place where Mark Zackabuer, the founder of Facebook worth billions of dollars, met his cofounder at a computer science club was financially supported by the school. That was where they developed the first version of the social network. Moreover, If Harvard University only allocate money to academic departments and activities, Jermey Lin, a famous NBA player who previously attended Harvard, would never be able to join the professional league.
Last but not least, universities and colleges put a lots of emphasis on school ranking and student admission rate. If a college has bias in supporting non-academic activities, students might not want to attend the college. For example, when I studied at Kaohsiung Medical School five years ago, the school decided to cut funding to sport's team so as to save the cost for the new library construction. After the new was released, those who are good at athlete such as weighting, tennis, and swimming, withdraw their applications immediately to my university, resulting in a significant decrease number of freshmen the next year. Therefore, balanced financial support activities is a pull factor to prospective students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... interests of individuals. Second, its the universities job to cultivate and i...
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Line 13, column 51, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ot least, universities and colleges put a lots of emphasis on school ranking and stude...
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Line 13, column 345, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...l decided to cut funding to sports team so as to save the cost for the new library const...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36734693878 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93465975851 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600583090379 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1128827696 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225607666789 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084861691819 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134278906456 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206232650655 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.202139832295 0.0645574589148 313% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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