Should the university and colleges support the sports and social activites with same equal financial as classes and libraries? I personally think they should, since education should provide comprehensive resource to the students. In addition, there are some benefits for supporting sports and social activites.
First of all, sports and social activities can release the pressure from studying. Without a doubt, the purpose of students is to earn basic knowledge and aquire professional skills which might be a stressful process. Therefore, joining some clubs or sport teams can help them take a break from the studying. For example, sometimes I recieved low grades from the exam which made me depressed a lot. For pullig myself out of this sad mood, I went for a jog in our campus which made me clam and think what to to in the next step.
Another reason is that through social activities can make new friends from other fields who may help them at study. Nowadays, More and more researches require experts from different fields and work together. This also happens in the cmapus. For intance, my master research was about liquid crystal lenses for 3D display. During the research, I was considering a new method to solve the problem I faced. But this solution was relating to material which was out of my field. Fortunetly, I knew a friend from sport team whose major was material. Therefore, with his hlep, I resolved the problem and obtained my master degree in the end.
Lasty, sport and social activites provide students motivation on their studying. Some students may not sure what career they want to do in the future when they entered the college. I was one of them. During the time in the university, I joined the track and field team and had hardcore training everyweek. Unfortuntely, once my ankel was injured which made me quite sad. I felt all my hard work was all void. In the meantime, I also realized that how inconvenient for a person without mobility in daily life. Since then, I made up my mind to study knowlwdge or reaserch relating to exoskeleton which can help disable people to walk again.
In conclusion, as the points I mentioned above, I think sports and social activites are important as classes and libraries. The benefits are not only the joy of making new friends but also the new opportunity for the future job. Hence, the universities and collages should invest the equal financial suppuert at sports and libraries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90407673861 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60716574628 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541966426859 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6825011297 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7407407407 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178794734297 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528870984145 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953613928977 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133067510229 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118292925266 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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