Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Happiness now becomes a very important issue for the humanity. Government and the society starting thinking seriously about how the happiness can influence people in work, how the degrees of satisfaction influences the productivity and so on. In my view, people in the present days were happier than in the past for the reasons that I explain in this essay.
First, with the advance of the artificial intelligence (AI), the humans now can communicate with each other in the planet with the speed of light using devices called computers or phones that makes the life more interesting and happy. For example, nowadays we can send a loved one or a friend a message congratulations for he or she achievement in school or work and at the same time wishes a happy birthday.
Second, the communications between people are more and faster than in the past that provides to the corporations and government research about how to improve the happiness of the employees and to the society. For example, in my job we had a course recently related to the degree of happiness, we have in our job. After this course, we fill up a questionary with a specific question about my degree of satisfaction in my activity, after some days my duties in my job were changed, and now I am much happy with my activity at the corporation.
Summarizing, the happiness in the present become so important in our life that the society creates mechanisms to promote happy people and now is part of the policy in most of the corporations and government sectors. That is why from my point of view the people in the present are much happier than were in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71328671329 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8229237033 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4872635708 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.8 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189738752443 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802203891301 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405412987973 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124767969275 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263496851123 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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