Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Comparing the education systems now and in the past and their pros and cons is an important matter to be addressed. Governments can use these data and analysis to figure out most efficient ways to educate children. Some people may think that it was easier to educate them in the past because of absence of smart phones while others would disagree. In my opinion, their education is much easier now rather than in the past because of two important reasons.
The main reason is that there is more facilities and educational program available nowadays. In the past, there were less schools and the financial situation of families were harsh and not every family could afford to buy the materials children needed in school. Moreover, there were less facilities available for each individual and also there was no planned educational program devised. For example, once, my father told me that his father was poor and he did not have a bag to carry his stuff to the school. He also told me that he was enthusiastic about painting and art but there were no such a class. However, nowadays, there is a wide variety of classes are available and also almost everyone can attend in one even for free. This experience taught me that education in the past was more difficult.
The second reason is that smart phones are also used to help the children to learn. The programmers and application developers have developed educational applications that contribute to the children's education. Since, children are into these devices and games their teachers and parents use particular applications to teach them the course materials. This way they will learn more efficiently while having fun time and being entertained. For instance, my cousin's son attends in a school where they are obliged to install specific apps on their phones and bring it with them to school. Whenever I visit them, he is busy playing these games with his friends and having fun with them. My cousin says that her son's grades has improved a lot since she changed his school. As you can see, using these devices helps children more effectively and in a fun way.
In sum, though some may disagree with my opinion, I deeply believe that that educating children is more easier nowadays than it was in the past. Not only are there more available facilities and program for everyone but also technology and smart phones are playing a detrimental role in their education. Hence, those who are responsible should increase the variety and also availability of courses everywhere and also devise methods that keep children entertained while educating the by means of new technologies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are more facilities'?
Suggestion: there are more facilities
...tant reasons. The main reason is that there is more facilities and educational program available nowad...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun schools is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...lable nowadays. In the past, there were less schools and the financial situation of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... needed in school. Moreover, there were less facilities available for each individua...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a fun way" with adverb for "fun"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ces helps children more effectively and in a fun way. In sum, though some may disagree wit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...agree with my opinion, I deeply believe that that educating children is more easier nowad...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...believe that that educating children is more easier nowadays than it was in the past. Not o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93258426966 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60165718797 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512359550562 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6798899419 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7727272727 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207095698236 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677435535923 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514396766052 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130917714692 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217421462865 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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