Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have been following to find a suitable job that makes him/ her be able to afford the expenditures. Growing the global economical problems has been caused the heated debated among sociologists that whether people should take a secure job or they wait for a job that more appealing. There are various ideas among the experts, however, from my perspective, it is better to wait for their satisfying job. I will elaborate on my points of view in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that as much as the individuals do not like their jobs, we expect less productivity and also, the less rate of efficiency. Not satisfying jobs have influenced other aspects the life too. For instance, people may have bad-tempered in their house or make some trouble to face colleagues. It could be in the future to create serious problems such as divorce, addiction, and others.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is that humans will become less creative if they are reluctant about their careers. According to the study conducted in the USA, whose have more satisfying jobs get more victorious and achievement in comparison to unwilling persons.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that the negative effect of these jobs not only do feel today but also will bring the feeling of regrets during the whole life. Although the vast majority of people might disagree with this issue, the desire to have an appealing job accompanied by the person forever time. It gives them the motivation to work hard and to develop in that field.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that waiting to find our interested job has a greater effect on our life that something we thought about it and it is undeniable makes us blissful in the short period of life. Consequently, it deserves to wain and search for it until we feel that we do all our best to have a greater life though sometimes the world does not let us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...rd the expenditures. Growing the global economical problems has been caused the heated deb...
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Line 9, column 406, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gh sometimes the world does not let us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81375358166 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73992630635 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578796561605 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1551197232 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286844113805 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857632551441 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630245564866 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143040073489 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608589373583 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.