Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
In 20 years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Humble car produced for faster transportation by Henry Ford has today become of the major form of transportation. In 20 years , the technology used to make cars is going to get better and number of cars should increase .
Government has spent huge amount to develop roads and highway transit systems. Cars have an excellent infrastructure in place.They are used as a major transport vehicle. It provides a medium to travel from one place to another and is useful for small family and single people . With the growing population and good infrastructure it's number is sure to increase .
People prefer to travel by their own car as it gives them the comfort of travelling without waiting for buses. Public transport is not dependable , for example when travelling late at night . Thus people always prefer to take their car . They even rent cars when travelling to another cities, simply for this ease of movement . In some places public transport may also not be reliable or frequent enough during business hours. Like remote places and smaller cities. It is not viable for the government to maintain public transport systems in such places . This is genuine difference between public transport and having a personal vehicle . It is unlikely to change in the future thus cars will always be in demand .
The income of people in developing nations is increasing ,with higher GDP for countries and increasing per capita income. In the next 20 years if this trend continues , people will get richer and start investing in comfortable traveling options like a personal car .
Within the next 20 years cars may also evolve to run on solar power. Thus cars will be more in demand due to technological improvements. Currently the government is trying to encourage people to use public transport and car pooling to reduce pollution and other ill effects of car emission. It is possible that in the future we use clean emission cars due to the aforementioned grounds. Research on Self driving cars is also being undertaken by several companies. If that becomes a reality the number of cars will increase as well . Today the old people and differently-abled people may not be able to drive cars. A self driving will be beneficial for them as well.
Improvement in technology , better economies and the inherent ease and flexibility of travelling by car is definitely a pointer that the future of cars is quite safe.Their numbers will definitely not decrease if not increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98536585366 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83487329071 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1410433428 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6153846154 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88461538462 5.45110844103 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216646468095 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675266074585 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506779125241 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126095541658 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607355222065 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.