Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In team working, the group will be helped more by person who will be willing to do what other group members want than by person who often strongly insists that things should be done in a way that is different from what the group wants to do.
Most people have to work in groups in their enterprise or on their scientific projects. therefore, having proper criteria when choosing the group members is of great importance for them since it directly affects the success of the project. personally, I hold the idea that people should consider choosing a member who tends to do the tasks in a way agreed by the whole group because of the following reasons.
First, reaching a consensus, everyone will be more willing to do his/her best to pursue the aim of the project. people, when seeing the project is planned based on their wills and suggestions, try harder to make the goal of the project satisfied as they want to prove the efficacy of their proposed ideas. therefore, they think of the success of the project as their own success. On the contrary, collaborating with a person insisting on his own ideas, which are contradictory with others’, individuals end up doing their tasks reluctantly; thus, no significant achievement ensues.
Second, group members, if agree to do what is preferred by all members, can speed up the project rate of progress. reaching an agreement could be really time-consuming when one disagrees with the rest’s opinion since each member tries to persuade the one who is against their idea. Additionally, when they fail to convince the opposer, they have to make new decisions about the plan substitution, which also demands a great deal of time. On the other hand, should the members accept to do what is in line with everyone’s opinion, they can save a plethora of time and spend it on the progress of the project.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that group projects can be helped by the members who agree with the others’ ideas instead of insisting on their owns. because not only they encourage everyone to perform their best on the project so that they can have their ideas succeed, but also they can help the project proceed at a fast pace as a lot of time is saved due to not arguing about what plan to follow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82571428571 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74287053568 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525714285714 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0950191464 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.923076923 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258943376737 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103464373647 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830638149088 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161218456659 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016024024439 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.