Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In today's world, people are responsible for different tasks, and they always try to be successful in those. Although many people work quickly and takin risk, I firmly believe that people, if they want to be fortune, they must work patiently and be sure that everything that they have done is correct. I think in this way due to two reasons. In the following, I will explain these reasons.

it is worth bearing in mind that doing a job slowly and be sure about all aspects of our work help us to be the winner, and it reduces the possibility of our lose. In fact, if people want to be a success in one field, they must have a wide variety of knowledge about that topic and be confident that everything they do is correct. if we have informed enough about our work, we will do that job cautiously. For instance, my father in the past work in the real state market, one day, he decided to start a new business in the textile industry. In the meantime, he was blind in this field and did not even know how to sell his products. Financial issues in this job were the essential part, like the other jobs. Therefore, he raises debt from a bank. after finishing the company and when it begins to work, the chinese market expanded in the textile industry, and my father could not compete with chinese low price products. As a result, he was sent to jail because he could not pay his commitment to the bank. So if we want to be success, we have to work slowly and correctly.

Furthermore, slowly doing a job reduces stress and will be helpful in the long run. In fact, stress not only is harmful to health, but also it can affect our functions, and we could not do our responsibilities with the maximum capacity. For instance, I work in a company in which my boss forces us to do our activities in a short period of time. Some of my workers got stressful because they always think that our employer wants to punish us due to not doing our jobs on time with high quality. one time, I ask him to let me do my duties very carefully and by my methods. At first, he told me that no, it is impossible. but after my persistence, he agreed. when he saw my functions, he decided to give me to do my job patiently.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that people should work slowly and be sure that it is true. this is because it helps us to be successful and because it reduces our stress and can improve our functions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36644591611 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46596843978 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461368653422 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8211915736 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4166666667 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147614450022 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440274109862 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432526614277 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101434569805 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189652368191 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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