Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
When it comes to the issue of how it is important to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct, Some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reason for their beliefs. On the other hand, Some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that working slowly and making sure that everything is correct is so important now because there are so many reasons support my point. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, In my opinion, Now it is important to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. Although, The life is very rapid now but the accuracy still the most important thing that we are looking for. And eventually everyone prefer the quality over the quantity in all the fields.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of how it is important to work slowly and ensure that everything is correct is the time that the person may waste in order to correct his mistakes. Correcting the error sometimes is hardest part in the work. So, if we work slowly with high accuracy. We will gain the time and the effort of checking and correcting the errors.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that inaccuracy lead to waste the money. No one gives the employee an excuse if his work full of the mistakes. If the person failed in doing his job well , he will lose his job or he may be punished by cutting his salary
From what has been discussed above, We may finally draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, But my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the hardest'.
Suggestion: is the hardest
...istakes. Correcting the error sometimes is hardest part in the work. So, if we work slowly...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... sometimes is hardest part in the work. So, if we work slowly with high accuracy. We w...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the person failed in doing his job well , he will lose his job or he may be punis...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, regarding, so, still, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66455696203 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44698995795 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8583397942 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295178043441 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105824838695 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993343229653 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144259893814 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105165505422 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.