Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
People have always been making various decisions on how to handle their work, they try to be quick and fast also makes their job done with high qualities. As a matter of fact, I agree with the statement and I will explicit my view points in following paragraphs.
First and foremost, these days we are living with automatic machines, artificial brains, robots, and computers that all of them are to make work done at a faster pace. We should be trained and gain experiences to work fast and get things done as soon as possible. Many software and computer programs are helping us to calculate the risk, however, risks are not eliminated.
The other reason that coming to my mind is when we are working fast we learn to work faster by gaining experience. Today's world is demanding a lot of subjects and work to be done faster than before. We cannot stay and waste our time and pretend we are thinking to make things right. For instance, in hospital nurses and surgeons should not waste their time to help patients.
Another noteworthy that should be addressed in this ongoing explanations is in the world we are responsible for more people as a human. We must take our responsibilities and make our best to do our task properly in a short time.
To sum up, I agree that our world is changing and we should try to be professional and in the shortest time, less risk get our work done with best possible results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: Much; Little
...nd get things done as soon as possible. Many software and computer programs are help...
^^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...rtest time, less risk get our work done with best possible results.
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ork done with best possible results.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, for instance, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58661417323 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54351733608 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.831354683 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246389086854 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916367823341 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499782558314 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142284985452 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04365596317 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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