Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the last twenty years ago, people and companies have been working enormously to make progress in their careers. Meanwhile, so many approaches have been propounded to reach the best results in this regard. To the best of my knowledge, it is essential to do your duties without any mistakes. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, working with a tremendous speed threatens work efficiency and accuracy. Job accuracy has a vital influence on the quality of your results. The better the quality of the results, your supervisor will be more satisfied. So, this boss's satisfaction will affect your progression rate in your career. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About ten years ago, I recruited a structural engineering company. My job was designing only optimally steel structures, which I spent lots of time to do my duties without any mistakes. Since I recruited in this company, it has developed enormously due to the accuracy and efficiency of optimally designed steel frames. Hence, my supervisor praised me, and I made remarkable progress in my profession, which I owe it all to the accuracy and efficiency of my jobs.
Secondly, making errors in a career threatens job security. Most of the companies compete with other corporations. If firms have lots of mistakes in their designs, products, and results, they will not excel in their works. So, it is vital for employees not to have any errors in their final, which can have an enormous influence on their career job security. For instance, four years ago, my brother had been working in a computer programming corporation. He worked a lot for doing his job well; however, he made numerous mistakes in his career. Therefore, due to the enormous mistakes that he had made, he was fired.
Moreover, most of the time, you need not do your jobs as quick as possible. It is essential to do your duties in logical time. However, some times, because of various situations, employees must work at a tremendous speed to finish their job at its desired time.
Finally, taking into account the whole reasons given above, I opine that doing jobs without any mistakes is essential. Results which have lost of errors and faults cause lots of problems for both companies and employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93094629156 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74653396597 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498721227621 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1995294077 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.12 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.64 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145302065569 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453395426711 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389635739059 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838046249899 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190342090067 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.