Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it is important to know about events happening the world, even it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Some people may agree with this statement and give us with sound reasons for their belief. On the other hand, some other people may disagree with this idea and have different opinion. Also, those opponents could probably provide us with stronger purposes for their thoughts. In my opinion, it is really important to knowing what is happening outside of the world. There is many reasons supporting my point of view, this short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraphs.
first, knowing about the events happening around the world is good way to spend our leisure time. Eventough, it is affecting my bad news, because it is true and more tangible than movie. In my perspective, our thought expects the news new event, are waiting become real in the world, for example, when i think about that can we go to Mars, or Moon, then news first people in United states walked in the. That news just attract me to because my thought are happening somewhere in the world. Moreover, my uncle's daughter has elipsy and give seizure and doctors said there is no treatment for her illnness, However, there announcement that numerous studies in University in the United states find way to curative elipsy, that event or news giving my uncle's family hope.
Second, It is really fun to know about events, and it amuses me. For example, good and bad news, rumors and facts happening all around the world so, that is really interesting even tough it is affecting to our lives. In my opinion, highly developing technological evolutions are facilitating people's lives that is more helping the people contribute the news. This combanition affecting to our life but also improving. In recent fact that my countries presidant visited to United states and made agreements that in order to improve our relation between 2 countries, was great opportunity for applicants who are applying to American visa.
In conclusion, knowing to events happening the world is good way to spend free time to listening new thing and also that would be very fun in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, second, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93817204301 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50969187371 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545698924731 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7498361921 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.058823529 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281838578591 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104267823001 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13382215836 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212923833317 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19655622359 0.0645574589148 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.