Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Throughout history, event has played a prominent role in all societies. Today, because we have a high technology, all countries are the same as the neighborhood; hence, they have the right effect on each other. A controversial question which is often raised this idea about how to occur incident in the countries effect to each other. Some people may hold the view that some events are not affected in my country. However, some other may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that all happening in all countries may have an effect to the all-world. I assert that world as like as a small village; therefore, I agree with this proposal. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite factors to be mentioned is that happening in all societies are the right result to the hole worlds, and we must know about the all contests will occurrence. To elaborate on my point, some countries have a few natural sources such as having enough food, water, oil, gas, and many other similar items and container; in conversely, other countries have the high quality of energy, technology, money, and many other circumstances. Therefore, people in poor countries need to be helped to be able to survive. If rich societies do not know about the poor countries, people who emergency need help would die, or they would be being sick. In other words, developing countries should assist the underdeveloped countries to solve problems, and it is showing that we really need to know about all events in the world. Consider Afghanistan for instance. Afghanistan is a poor and underdeveloped country; thus, it needs international help to solve the problem such as having war and lacking food.
In addition, I believe that it has positive effects if we know about events happening in all the world. In other words, some technology is invented in the modern country so that we must give news from a developed country. Also, since some societies have high technology in the field of hard diseases such as cancer, herd attack, and many another disease, all societies must get information from these societies. I believe that if we know about what event occurs in all the world not only help to develop my county but also help my country to solve problems.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that we must get information from all over the world. Get information from the country not only have benefits for poor counties but also help all countries to solve the problems, and they can promote in all fields like science and technology
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89592760181 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73329761075 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5234233462 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129731026544 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521715791573 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522167609764 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862723376999 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348354665087 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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