Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Friends are the most important gift in our life, they are precious. As someone says, new friends are silver, but old is gold, so old friends are unique. Some people think friends are replaceable and should be changed according to time and situation. In my personal opinion, we should always be in touch with our old pals. I will pinpoint some reasons to strengthen my statement.
Let's start with, we grown up with our cradle friends, so they are very familiar with our behavior and habits. As they know our weakness and strengths, as result they can guide us to overcome any challenges either personal or professional and support us during tough time. For instance, after my high school I was little confuse about pursuing my carrier either in Engineering or in sports activities, my best friend know me that my analytical skill and critical thinking are awesome so she guided me to proceed ahead with my engineering carrier as result today I can see myself as a successful Engineer and credit goes her.
In addition, we are not denying the fact as these days due to hectic schedule and fast life we won't able to keep much contact with our old friends and we makes new friends according to situation and need, but the relationship build on the need basis would not last long. Furthermore, making new friend is simple but to know about him in short duration is not easy because building trust takes time, formality comes in at each and every step. Hence it is best to keep in touch with your old friends who already know about you and your secrets.
In a word owing to aforementioned reasonable causes and elucidations described in previous paragraphs, it appears to be good to draw the founded conclusion that, it is important to keep old friends rather than making new friends.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-18 | m_elec | 60 | view |
| 2019-11-26 | JohnSmith96 | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-05 | Navis | 70 | view |
| 2019-10-23 | swapnil.paliwal | 66 | view |
| 2019-10-23 | swapnil.paliwal | 66 | view |
- You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. 75
- People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? 67
- Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.Write a letter to the local council, in your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre. - Explain the why the centr 73
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman. In your letterr 45
- You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems » w 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... according to time and situation. In my personal opinion, we should always be in touch with our ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... reasons to strengthen my statement. Lets start with, we grown up with our cradle...
^^^^
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'grew'?
Suggestion: grew
...en my statement. Lets start with, we grown up with our cradle friends, so they are...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...and credit goes her. In addition, we are not denying the fact as these days due to hectic sc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...uch contact with our old friends and we makes new friends according to situation and ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...mality comes in at each and every step. Hence it is best to keep in touch with your o...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202941176471 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.161764705882 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.129411764706 0.0866891130778 149% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0411764705882 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.114705882353 0.0685040099705 167% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111764705882 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0352941176471 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56983333944 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382352941176 0.0309702414327 123% => OK
Particles: 0.00294117647059 0.00188951952338 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.0382352941176 0.0887237588012 43% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176470588235 0.0209618222197 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00294117647059 0.0139019557991 21% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1786.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 312.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72435897436 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314102564103 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237179487179 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153846153846 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0929487179487 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56983333944 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 64.0202262204 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.0719122707 48.84282405 182% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.833333333 120.699889404 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 49.7179487179 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.10185185185 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387060087984 0.300154397459 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126130604886 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0609093160734 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562650444962 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181216151711 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167785440899 0.114077575197 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116734442679 0.0781384742642 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.302432347743 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0528306343658 0.067059652881 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27814594461 0.210909579961 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113390283796 0.0618886996521 183% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.