Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Time is the most important thing in our life. As someone says time never will come back. May be a person not concern about what he/she doing now, but either they concern or not concern but their future will be decided by the work what they are doing in present. So we should utilize our time with an appropriate way. The issue whether people today spend too much time on their personal enjoyment – doing things that they like rather than doing things they should do or not aroused much controversy among different people of different perspective, different age and different occupation. Some contend think people should spend their time on their person enjoyment and grooming, it will regulate their mood, help them to keep calm in such fierce competitive world and make them more energetic to fulfill their responsibility towards work and family. Personally, I am not in favor of notion, the people should do things what they should do due to many reasons which I am explaining in further paragraphs.
To begin with, there is fierce competition in today's world everywhere since the age of student to working professional. You have to face the challenges to proof yourself better than your colleagues to make job stability, get good promotion and hikes in salary. In the process of proving yourself we lost our personal enjoyment. We have to work hard and devote more time towards work to become the best person among the horde. In the busy and hectic schedule a person hardly getting the time to make relax himself and to do the things of their enjoyment. For example I was working in an IT firm since last 2 years but before 6 month they hire a new resource to share my workload. I trained her and taught her everything, now she starts working hard to take my position. Therefore, I have to work hard to sustain my position and have to ignore all my personal issue and enjoyment to devote more time towards my work. Moreover, in school life students also facing a taught competition among their peers, thus, they study hard and no time to play as before and as result, they got high score for their better future.
In addition to the pressure of competition, due to the development of technology and modern life style, the basic needs of people increased, the human desire becomes insatiable. Everyone have dream to avail latest technology, trying to make luxurious life as much as they can. To fulfill high dreams and desire a person have to work hard in their work to get plenty amount of salary. For example I personally feels that I should have latest household at my home i.e. phone, television etc. To attain my dream I have to do the overtime sometime and have to ignore the activities of my personal interest like get- together with friends, relaxing on beach. I believe a person want to do the things what they likes, but due to social pressure they won't able to do the things of their enjoyment, indeed, they are doing the thing what they should do.
To wrap it up, as all thing considered, we have to spend more time to do the activities in which we enjoy our fullest. This will regulate our mood and makes us stress free, which foster to focus on our work and become more productive. Nevertheless, due to fierce competition and to satisfy our needs and family responsibility, we have to do what we should do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s the most important thing in our life. As someone says time never will come back....
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'come'.
Suggestion: will never come
...thing in our life. As someone says time never will come back. May be a person not concern about...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...one says time never will come back. May be a person not concern about what he/she ...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... a person not concern about what he/she doing now, but either they concern or not con...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...enjoyment. For example I was working in an IT firm since last 2 years but before 6 mo...
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Line 2, column 590, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'firms'?
Suggestion: firms
...ent. For example I was working in an IT firm since last 2 years but before 6 month t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 627, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...IT firm since last 2 years but before 6 month they hire a new resource to share my wo...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
...esire becomes insatiable. Everyone have dream to avail latest technology, trying to m...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'avail the latest'.
Suggestion: avail the latest
...omes insatiable. Everyone have dream to avail latest technology, trying to make luxurious li...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...unt of salary. For example I personally feels that I should have latest household at ...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the latest'.
Suggestion: have the latest
...xample I personally feels that I should have latest household at my home i.e. phone, televi...
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Line 3, column 705, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'like'
Suggestion: like
... person want to do the things what they likes, but due to social pressure they wont a...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in addition', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220839813375 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.167962674961 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0917573872473 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0435458786936 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.105754276827 0.0685040099705 154% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0886469673406 0.118717715034 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0295489891135 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51369572727 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0606531881804 0.0309702414327 196% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00155520995334 0.00188951952338 82% => OK
Determiners: 0.054432348367 0.0887237588012 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0202177293935 0.0209618222197 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0139968895801 0.0139019557991 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3327.0 2387.08602151 139% => OK
No of words: 589.0 408.028673835 144% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64855687606 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312393887946 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193548387097 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129032258065 0.174417080927 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.088285229202 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51369572727 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453310696095 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.5495681168 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6538461538 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2103315359 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.961538462 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6538461538 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.644075263715 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.0086848635 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.06862745098 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422172477074 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0947808422042 0.103427244359 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0652958352934 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.463681772891 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177799850417 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138615808187 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103607417134 0.0781384742642 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.456942630499 0.336927656856 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117836029815 0.067059652881 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304611209288 0.210909579961 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654112990815 0.0618886996521 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 13.6433691756 183% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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