Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by bindek on Wed, 04/03/2019 - 14:48

When all people were asked about if they have best, long-lasting in their life, most of them would answer definitely yes. I think this friendship can depend on plenty of different factors such as how they treat to each other or how they maintain their relationship.
I profoundly do believe that keeping your friends from elementary, middle school or even from kindergarten would be your best friend forever who always will be there for you.

First of all, Keeping your old friends offers us great strong relationship. There is no doubt that friends play an important role and bring enormous benefits for our life. For example, I can recall a my father's oldest friend form his high school who studied together and influenced positively all this time. My father used to be very nerd that nobody wants to hang out with him. Only one person tried to make friend with him and lasts forever being with him during not only happy time but also harshness time. When he was sick or when our parent's wedding were holding, his only friend was there with us.

In addition to the strong relationship, you and your best friend build great loyalty and trustful connection between each other even no body could break it. In every relationship between couple, friend, teacher or students, in my view, there is only one factor can impact the relationship lasting longer or no. Loyalty, telling the truth all the time would enhance the opportunity to maintaining your best friend with you forever. By way of example, I have a friend who shares her problems, issues or happiest moment with me all the time. I feel grateful listening to her because i always appreciate having my friend and telling her truth, willing to listen my opinion in her cases.

Last but not the least, making new friends with someone doesn't necessarily mean that a fresh friends cannot develop close ties and develop long-lasting friendship. It is widely believed that when you grow up, it is difficult to build long-lasting friendship. I know plenty people who have friends from their work and keep their friendship longer. So i don't agree it is fair to claim that, just because of misconception about new friends won't last longer, they are somehow unable to develop close, strong and long-lasting friendship.

From all the discussions mentioned above, i can draw the conclusion that saving your friends from your childhood would be life-time friends who always give a path on your back, and whatever happens to you, they will be there for you.
I hope that these moments being with best friends bring a smile on everybody's face who just think about this old but gold memories.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'my'?
Suggestion: a; my
...for our life. For example, I can recall a my fathers oldest friend form his high sch...
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Suggestion: fathers the oldest
...ur life. For example, I can recall a my fathers oldest friend form his high school who studied...
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Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...tful connection between each other even no body could break it. In every relationship b...
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... least, making new friends with someone doesnt necessarily mean that a fresh friends c...
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... and keep their friendship longer. So i dont agree it is fair to claim that, just be...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...om all the discussions mentioned above, i can draw the conclusion that saving you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88274336283 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50089164928 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535398230088 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5730653349 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.35 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227207709036 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765363452385 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598358258324 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118519154329 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559183791717 0.0645574589148 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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