Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, by arrival of new and advanced technology, the life are different from the past. There are a substantial number of people who are of the opinion that today's life are more easier than it was when our grandparents were children and I absolutely agree with them. I elucidate my ideas by following explainations.
First and for most, by emerging new technology and advancement in transportation, people are able to travel and commute fastly and comfortably. There are lots of transportation vehicle such as train and airplane that did not exist before or might be too expensive to public use. As a result, people todays can do their job as a professor in a city that is 600 kilometer far from their home and come home in the afternoon. A vivid example is my father. He goes to Tehran and come back Yazd by plane every day without being tired of traveling. So, the transportation advancement make today's life more comfortable than the life of past.
Secondly, the emergence of internet helps people to do their shopping without going out for shop. Also, they can order their meal and recieve it by the door of house. For example, I always order my shoes from online shops. I should not go to crowded shopping mall or drive in a traffic. That's why, the internet brings us the chance of living more comfortable and calm than the time our grandparents were children.
Additionally, the availability of healthy food and fresh water contribute to the consuming calmly without hesitate of lack of them for washing, drinking or cooking, but in the past our parents tackled with kind of problem and they were a constant concern for them.
In sum, the advancement of technology and transportation vehicle, emergence of internet and availability of water and healthy food improve the life condition and I strongly believe life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...r of people who are of the opinion that todays life are more easier than it was when o...
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Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...are of the opinion that todays life are more easier than it was when our grandparents were ...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o public use. As a result, people todays can do their job as a professor in a cit...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...ob as a professor in a city that is 600 kilometer far from their home and come home in th...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'traffic'.
Suggestion: traffic
...go to crowded shopping mall or drive in a traffic. Thats why, the internet brings us the ...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ed shopping mall or drive in a traffic. Thats why, the internet brings us the chance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88957055215 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87985680534 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527607361963 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4675733012 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256462659837 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777768822244 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106933379874 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157659205801 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100618754625 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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