Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
Today's world is pervaded by modern technologies such as the internet, the high-speed train, smart cars, etc. With these technologies bring us about such faster and more simple in our life. In my opinion, the younger generation's life is more simple compared to the grandparents' generation. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, in the past, opportunities like education or jobs are difficult to reach. The birth of the internet creates the rapid world connection. Technically, everybody in this world could be connected to each other and this leads to easier information finding. My grandfather's experience is a compelling example of this. He always told me the story, about fifty years ago, he was looking for a job to make money to serve his mother but it took two years by walking around the fish market and keep asking people who needed a hand to help carry the fish box. He said that it took a lot of patience to get the first jobs. On the other hand, my personal experience, last year I graduated from my university and was looking for a job. I just put my name on the job finding website, in a heartbeat, there is company calls me and set up for the interview. Without these technologies, I could not get easy finding jobs.
Secondly, today's transportation is much easier than in the past. The new technologies have been engineered all the time to be smarter and more productive such as the smart cars which are programmed to drive by themselves, or the smart transits which covered most of part in the city making such a transport simple. For instance, about ten years ago, my hometown has no transit bus, so my life of going outside to meet my friend is difficult. I need my mother to use her own car to be there. The bus, however, has been developed and used in my hometown for four years now, I could enjoy going hangout with my friends via bus. Without the developed transits, my life would depend on my mother's car as ten years ago.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that twenty-first-century life is better than in the past. That's because the technologies could provide us the more effective and more comfortable life and because we could go anywhere by not depend on the individual cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...in our life. In my opinion, the younger generations life is more simple compared to the gra...
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Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'grandparents'' or 'grandparent's'?
Suggestion: grandparents'; grandparent's
...ons life is more simple compared to the grandparents generation. I feel this way for two mai...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...entury life is better than in the past. Thats because the technologies could provide ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62871287129 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76874332753 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55198019802 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1884340928 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0476190476 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955946089133 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318013339812 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385286103207 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068191909801 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028510547551 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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