Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Generally, one of the most important ways to increase the selling of products is advertising. Today, many companies and markets want to utilize this way to introduce and demonstrate their products very interesting and useful to the customers. Many people are of the opinion that advertisements are not demonstrated the real aspects of things but others refute this notion. I firmly agree that advertisements always are not real and most of the time use exaggeration for convincing the customers.
First of all, one of the critical factors in the advertising the products is to show the importance of that with famous people, this is the best way make customers convince and they should buy them, this is the trick of advertiser use in their work. For instance, in the car company when they want to show that their products are fast and unique, they help from famous people and celebrities such as famous driver that speak about the special options of car, its features to be unique and fast versus other cars, hence, people immediately accept that this car is faster even if this was not in real.
Another reason that needs to be considered is that advertiser tries to make customers excited, this is another way that causes people eager for buying their products. For example, I saw that in one of the electrical companies, when they want to convince people to buy their laptop, they show that this laptop is so light and easily portable, due to the very low weight the laptop can stand on the air and flow. This unreal advertisement make people excited that Wow! If we buy this laptop, we will carry it in anywhere easily, so, they want to try and then buy it.
In summary, I totally believe that advertiser can convince people just buy exaggeration and put people in the unreal situation, so, their advertisement is not always true.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...it in anywhere easily, so, they want to try and then buy it. In summary, I totally b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80817610063 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61905890772 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487421383648 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6650534989 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.9 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122940693331 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615535767079 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301249113929 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788360879528 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020131712944 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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