Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
I agree that our nowadays way of life will impact on future generations, and I will show my viewpoint in this essay.
In the first place, it is easy to see that the actual democratic system that rules a lot of countries just doesn't try to live in harmony with the mother's nature. The capitalism in our society is focused on consumerism, destroying plants and ecosystems to get raw materials to products, and it will be bad to the future generations because there will be fewer materials to all humankind and will destroy some natural beauty that can't be replaced. For example, my city had a forest with a lot of rare animals and trees, but it had been destroyed over time. So, my new cousins and kids in the city will never have fun in this forest, discover new things and understand that our world is more than the cities. Unfortunately, it wasn't just a place to hang out. Some citizens used this to do woodwork, it is a tradition of my region, but we always had did on an ecological way. Now, without this forest, the culture is dying, and citizens are losing their jobs because there aren't any of our wood to work.
Secondly, the pollution level is just coming to be higher, making the world warm and causing ailments in all Earth. It will be harder for future generations to live on our planet because the temperature will increase and the pollution gases will be in all places, destroying their lungs and causing more problems. Acid is already raining, and more people are dying of skin cancer due to the UV rays. It will look like some cyberpunk movie as Blade Runner 2019, where the people live in a broken world.
In conclusion, I believe that if we don't change our way of life, the next generations will be doomed, and it will be sooner than we think.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...stem that rules a lot of countries just doesnt try to live in harmony with the mothers...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mothers'' or 'mother's'?
Suggestion: mothers'; mother's
... doesnt try to live in harmony with the mothers nature. The capitalism in our society i...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d will destroy some natural beauty that cant be replaced. For example, my city had a...
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Suggestion: wasn't
...more than the cities. Unfortunately, it wasnt just a place to hang out. Some citizens...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'had' and 'did'.
Suggestion: had always did
... it is a tradition of my region, but we always had did on an ecological way. Now, without this...
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Suggestion: done
...adition of my region, but we always had did on an ecological way. Now, without this...
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...ens are losing their jobs because there arent any of our wood to work. Secondly, t...
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Suggestion:
...d, and it will be sooner than we think.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50931677019 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46085827784 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2311977699 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224464069783 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773756265144 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957706803005 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181603775339 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111472750428 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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