Education and its importance in the society has undergone significant changes in the past decades and parents' attitude has also altered. Thus, it's crystal clear that they are more involved in their children's education. In my opinion, nowadays according to the importance of knowledge and education, it's every parent's wish to see that their children have achieved a high position in education and is prosperous and successful in his/her life. Now in the following article, I try to give reasons why I think so.
To begin with, in this modern day, parents are engulfed in their children’s life taking care more about them in all fields, not only education. The number of children in each house has decreased and while my father had 7 siblings, I just have two. That's a great deal and parents have more time to spend for each of the children. On the other side, schools want parents to participate in their children educational life, and that's a key factor. As a matter of fact, schools help parents in the process of controlling their offspring’s educations to be more involved, and the fewer number of children enables them to be more successful in this procedure of time-devoting. As a personal experience, I remember that when I was in the first year of elementary school, I didn't used to do my homework, and I just told lie to my mother about not having any homework to do. I thought she wouldn't understand, but one day my teacher called her, and asked my mother about the reason why I didn't do my homework. After that my mother was observing me strictly and I couldn't flee from doing homework. But it’s obvious that if I had another little baby sister crying, my mother didn’t have enough time to watch my work.
Moreover, contemporary education's importance has changed dramatically, and almost everyone knows that "knowledge is power". Whereas in the past, money making role of children was more notable and consequently children had to do jobs to make money. Nobody would think of going to school to study with a perspective of a job in mind. However, in this era, some parents even disagree with a part-time job for their children, and want them just to study their own lessons. Since nowadays better jobs require higher education, parents would rather their children study hard in order to find a well-paid job in the future. As my grandfather says, he had to work in a store with his father just when he was 12 and he didn't have any time to study for school material, although he was interested. On contrary, my brother and I are dependent on my father financially in the age of twenty or so, and my father always tells us not to worry about financial matters. He reminds us regularly that if we study hard enough, our effort won't be useless and we will be powerful with our education and job in a future that is not far.
To wrap it up, parents pay more attention to their children as their number has decreased, and they like to encourage them to study hard to find a good position when they got independent adults. These are the reasons why parents pay more attention to their children education in comparison to past decades that we didn't even have schools in every city or town. At least in my country, education and its place has changed as a way to get to a brighter future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, at least, i think, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2740.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 585.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68376068376 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9180050066 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73543586918 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473504273504 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 862.2 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8463027391 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45833333333 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273939629333 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901136909607 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056814971348 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188328773503 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144078551348 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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