Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although there is no simple answer to this question, I profoundly believe that people should spend more time on their things they have to do. When people were asked about if they are really enjoying what they are doing, some of them would answer definitely no. People tend to chase things which bring happiness and enjoyment. But it is not guarantee that it also could bring success and useful guide how to be well-being through this competitive society.
First of all, Enjoyment activities don't always bring us great opportunity to success or development. Personally, enjoyment activities sometimes seem to waste time. I can recall my friend from my university days who spent her valuable student years in inefficient way. She used to go parties every Friday and attend a lot of useless community groups. She didn't concentrate fully on her study and her grades suffered. As a result, she couldn't get hired in a good company while other students who were responsible for their study succeed in their career.
Furthermore, if we focus on more what really necessary to our future, we have to face to bare truthful and difficulties. On the other hand, enjoyment allow us to stick in comfort zone which everyone has a difficulty to neglect it and pursue their things need to do. If we could ignore some of our events and spend our time on tasks including new challenges, new project and self-development program, it offers us huge potential to enhance career, finance and family situation, so on.
Finally, Staying and focusing only on things doesn't necessarily mean that people should avoid from amusement activities. By way of example, I usually meet with my friends or go to the party once a month because I haven't enough time to manage everything. As I am mother of one kid, I'm responsible for take care of him, look after his every situation and participate his school activities. My son is matters to me more and I hope it will bring enormous benefits when he grew up.
From what we discussed so far, I can draw a conclusion that human beings should mostly pursue their goal, success and which could bring you more self-development. There is no doubt that everybody wants some rest, enjoying activities. That's why I highly recommend that people should balance their life on both happiness events and necessary works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, well, while, no doubt, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90126582278 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71952237623 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60253164557 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1266413779 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180216244837 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505820594423 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073753916787 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953280414717 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769679674578 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.