Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is widely believed that playing video games is a waste of time for children. I do agree that, to some degrees, overplaying computer games is harmful for one's growth. However, preventing children from it is unacceptable. My view is based on psychological, educational and social reasons.
From a educational perspective, video games nowadays are progressing towards a direction beneficial to children's health and development. Take myself as an example, I also play games on the computer. And I find out that when I purchase a game, it is clearly limited for a specific age group. And the online shop provides some educational games which are well made and benefit intellectual development of children.
Psychologically, the training of brain development is an essential part of one's growth, which can be performed through playing digital games. Especially for the time when mobile digitial devices are widely used and developing fast. Using digital games as a way of intellectual traing of childrem becomes a fashionable way of education.
Socially, playing computer games has become a method of establishing social relationship with others. As a child, he or she may make a friend through difital world. And in reality, it is such a common phenomenon that children in the same class play the same game and tied up together through playing games at the same time and in the same digital space.
In conclusion, it is unavoidable for people nowdays to embrave the presence of digital games. And what is the matter is whether we can play them in the right way, rather than removing them from the colorful world. Take it, and make it benefical to the growth of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05395683453 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97045864364 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553956834532 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6172347419 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6470588235 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255216529627 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772963298832 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657177983698 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139910767973 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510728059831 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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