Do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
“In twenty year there will be fewer cars in use than there are today”
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Some people suggest that, as the world moving forward, there will be more cars in use in the next two decades than there are now. Because technologies make everything faster, people may even need the faster car than the current models available. However, in my opinion, I believe that in the future, people tend to decrease the use of car. The world can has the better means of transportation. In this essay, I will provide the reasons and examples to support my viewpoint.
First, the public transportation tends to be cheaper because of the advanced technologies. Although nowadays the cost of flying across the continents limits people to stay around their hometown, it’s possible that there will be the other cheaper and easier ways to transfer people or product in upcoming future. For example, recently, the Space X company has launched the first reusable sky rocket that can return to the Earth after finishing the mission in the space. This innovation reduce the cost of sending the rocket into the space enormously and become the hope of the new transportation mode for the humanity. Clearly, it’s very likely that the transportation cost will be reduced immensely soon and the cars in use will be reduced.
Second, people will seek for the comfortable more than they do in the pass. Anything quick and easy will be more interested. For instance, now Uber, the start-ups company from the US, can provide the driver for anyone who need by just using the mobile phone. There’s no need to seek for the taxi anymore and surely no need to own a car. This makes people have more time to do things that matter rather than wasting time on non-productive tasks. Moreover, other transportation modes can take people to their destination faster than using car. There’re more and more routes of airplane, which far faster than car. So people tends to switch the mean of transportation from car to other mode.
Lastly, the car emits more pollution than the public transport. People all over the world now concern so much about the environment. They realize that human rely on the situation of the Earth. Hurting the nature by using more energy can hurt ourselves as well. To illustrate, the train need only one machine to put it forward but can carry more than 100 persons. In contrast, the car uses one machine to carry only 3-4 people. As a result, people recognize the negative impact of using cars and tends to decrease the use of them.
In conclusion, there’re several reasons that the number of the cars in use will be decreased. The other transportation modes will be cheaper and take place of cars. As mentioned, people tends to seek for the easier way to transport and reduce the pollution by reducing the use of cars. For the reasons explored above, I strongly feel that in the next twenty years, there will be fewer cars than there are now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'reduces'.
Suggestion: reduces
...e mission in the space. This innovation reduce the cost of sending the rocket into the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'lastly', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238615664845 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.138433515483 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0837887067395 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0619307832423 0.046263068375 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0218579234973 0.0685040099705 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129326047359 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0291438979964 0.0351676179071 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55763763442 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327868852459 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114754098361 0.0887237588012 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0327868852459 0.0209618222197 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00728597449909 0.0139019557991 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2865.0 2387.08602151 120% => OK
No of words: 494.0 408.028673835 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7995951417 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325910931174 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210526315789 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135627530364 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0890688259109 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55763763442 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475708502024 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 54.8248170721 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0344827586 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8140876721 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7931034483 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0344827586 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.51724137931 0.644075263715 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 38.0871143376 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.7868852459 1.45489161554 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329496624434 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112403483057 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0830473514635 0.0752933317313 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530932505574 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122104308235 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134813024272 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927386160612 0.0781384742642 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.503037885867 0.336927656856 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0572873862815 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261875947317 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929419302706 0.0618886996521 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.91756272401 264% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.75985663082 362% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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