do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
I have been faced with many people in my life that are extremely exteroverted and would like to socialize with different people and explore the world and discover new opportunities to have more and newer friends every day. However, I believe that as many new friends as you have,it is really vital to keep your old friends as treasure because of three reasons: First, they are going to be there in the time of desperation and when you need them. Second, they are more trustworthy. And finally, you can be far more comfortabe around them.
First, they will be with you in the time of need. There is an old saying which goes like:"A friend in need is a friend indeed". A friend who can be there when you need them is a good friend. This feature can definitely be seen in old friends. If you are going through a dilemma or difficulty in your life, a fair-weathered friend can be a good company and is going to be available to help you because of the history you have with them and due to how long you have known each other. Besides, if you are in financial trouble you can count on them for borrowing money.
Second, they are the ones that you have known for ages so that makes it really easy for you to put your trust in them. For instance, if you have a two year old kid and you need a decent person to babysit your child who would you trust more than an old friend? In addition, due to the time that you have spent together and the knowledge that you have about your old friends, you are honest with each other which make it really easier to maintain a healthy friendship. Also, because of this trust you can lend them stuff that belongs to you or money.
Finally, you can be a lot more comfortable around your old friends. You do not have to pretend that you are ok when your are not. you do not have to hide or supress your feelings because you are worried about being judged.And you do not have to conceal your true colors because of losing a friend. You are sure whatever happens,they are going to be there.
In conclusion, one individual might have a lot of people around in his or her lifetime. But what distingiushes these friends from one another is how old they have been friends with that individual. Because that way,they can trust each other, be comfortable around each other, be a good company in time of a predicament and by the help of the honesty and trust that they have built after ages,they can build spectacular friendships throughout their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43107221007 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44181116472 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420131291028 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0779287634 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4285714286 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7619047619 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304694263092 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121636827059 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684747482195 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20553542115 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795711663123 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.