do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
some rules are very strict for young people to follow or obey, so they do not have to follow and obey these rules.
In a few predecessor decades people have learned to align themselves to the fact saying every one need to follow the rules, whether rich or poor, adult or juvenile or even child. In order to have the society without any violence and becoming more civilized many rules and principles have been enacted by governments. Also there are punishment for people who are offensive. always one of the most argumentative problem between people and legislative councils has been whatever young people should obey all the enacted laws in cases which are very strict for them or not. I am the opinion saying young people should follow and obey all laws same as the other members of society. In what follows, I will delve into my conspicuous reason in order to justify my stand points.
Firstly, the most important reason which is noteworthy being taken an account meticulously is that if young people not obey the rules they learn disobeying. So when they commit a crime and not punished only because they are children, they are thought not follow the rules and it can contribute them being expected to be forgiven always. Take it as a personally experience, my cousin and I were very close when we were children. My cousin always used to pick money up from his father’s pocket. My uncle never didn’t consider any punishment for him. His reason was he was only a child. Two years ago he was captured by police in charge of robbing gold form a jewelry. Another example which comes to my mind is that when a child kills another child. The penalty for killing someone is death. Should the killer be forgiven only because he is a child? What will happened to the killer? He will be imprisoned until he can be understood his crime’s penalty.
Secondly, another pivotal reason which is worth being explained is that all of us are equal front of the law. If someone do something wrong and not be confront with some consequences, following the rules can’t be expected any more. We put some consequences for some actions in society to make it clear that we do not tolerate these actions. So when the people realize that their actions have some consequences they will not continue their doing. For instance consider a country named Singapore which has considered two years imprisonment as a punishment for throwing garbage in street. So people do not throw their garbage everywhere. In other side consider a country which doesn’t have any punishment for this action. What will happened? The city will become a huge dustbin.
To recapitulate, contemplation aforementioned reason above, one effortlessly can conclude that if young people know that their actions don’t have any consequences they will have good accuses for their future law-breaking. Also all people are seen tantamount by low. So if someone commit a crime and not be punished, it would be a contagious disease in society. So I think young people should follow and obey the rules however it is strict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2471.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89306930693 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70986029336 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485148514851 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1260098832 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7096774194 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2903225806 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.67741935484 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287173672858 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700523202294 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854992647599 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195323490715 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567776088026 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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