Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.
teachers play a very crucial role in the life of a person as he provides the path by assessing his student potential and accordingly shaping the career of a person. therefore, it becomes a necessity to appreciate the role of teacher in our life. However, as the time has evolved there are certain established beliefs have started to change, one of them being respecting the teacher though in many fields of profession there is still laudable appreciation is received by the teacher.
With change in time, what mostly effected us the most is our level of tolerance and this has imparted us to make our children fragile and crumble under situations which demand tolerance. The result of this has directly influenced the role of teachers as now their hands are tied and they cannot punish their students or can exert pressure over them by giving them homework or assigning students with regular quizzes. If a teacher make a step to breach this tradition, the very next day he is received with complaints from parents and advice from authority to change his method of teaching. These restrictions over a teacher have made them play a minimal role in student lives due to which the student consider their teachers just like another normal human being in their life and gets deprived of the personalised career advice which a teacher can give to a student. therefore, there is an appreciable decline in the values and respect given to a teacher by their student which is deleterious for students.
However, there are still some professions apart from school like sports where still there are no restrictions involved over coaches to train their student and they can freely train their student in whatever way they like. The outcome of this is that student becomes very successful in his career bringing fame and money to himself as well as to his nation. Moreover, this same successful person when interviewed does not forget to recount his training and how he has achieved this position because of his teacher and ascribing his success to his teacher. therefore, still there are many fields in which the teacher is reverent by their student as here teacher is given complete liberty to teach the student.
In sum, making a direct argument that teacher is not respected in today's era is a bit presumptuous one rather one should consider different areas to conclude. it is a truth that in schools the value of teacher has degraded as they are not allowed to punish student and teach in the way they want but still there are many profession where still teachers are admired as the role model and student are willing to take any orders from their teacher. therefore, in some fields teachers have lost their value and respect compared to in the past whereas in some the teacher's value and respect is unshaken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85862785863 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51999580261 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449064449064 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9590791454 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.8 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0666666667 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19966906227 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823885589296 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411260638884 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139770384563 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369921685597 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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