Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern world in order to excel, businesses have to overcome a lot of challenges of the competition and one of the ways to do this is to incorporate new methods into a work routine. Personally, I think that being risky and innovative are keys to success. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, businessmen who are not afraid to try something new can attract a lot of customers. These days, competition between companies is tremendous and if people want to win in this, they have to please their clients with services, which they had never experienced before. My company`s attempt can provide a great illustration of this point. I work in a pharmacy and recently my supervisors decided to develop a new system to serve our customers in the best way. In short, the patients who had many prescriptions to fill every month, and whose scripts were written on different dates had the opportunity to do not come to the pharmacy every week to purchase their medication, but to get them all together once a month. Although at first, the project seemed arduous technically to perform, we took a risk and in fact, our customers were truly happy with its outcomes since they could save a lot of time. Moreover, they preferred our pharmacy to others.
Secondly, people like to work with those who are risky and prone to changes. When a job is interesting and versatile, people try to keep it and therefore, they strive to accomplish their tasks effectively. This can benefit financially an entire organization that these employees are part of. For instance, my husband is a farmer and he often praises his manager for creativity and courage. My spouse`s boss constantly renews the farm`s equipment and in this way, his employees always have a chance to operate modern tractors and combines, which is incredibly comfortable and productive. As a result, my husband says that he will never quit his job, but will endeavor to be a valuable worker and will keep farming side by side with his supervisor, and evolve the business. That is why I think that it is important to experiment.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is more advantageous to take a risk than to continue doing only well-known things. This is because, it helps companies to obtain their clients` loyalty, and encourages their employees to work hard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ogether once a month. Although at first, the project seemed arduous technically t...
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...ncourages their employees to work hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in short, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8487804878 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89577016188 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565853658537 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7183838738 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.631578947 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141768751451 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411334879169 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504798676333 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925727150335 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355047967631 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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