Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since past to now, teaching have been an important job in every society, and people who work in this field deserve to be valued. That some individuals assert that teachers are less noticeable these days in compare with the past makes me unhappy; but it is a through fact to some extent. In my view, 3 main reasons contribute to this unwilling event, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, by developing the technology, various and extended source of information is available. each person who want be aware of a matter can easily search through internet and access to vast range of information about that certain field. For example, when I was a primary school student, if I had a question about my class materials, I should wait until the next day to ask from my teacher; but now my sister who is only 10 years old, is aware about how she can both search through websites and find answer for her complex questions! Thus, dependence to teachers is decreasing now.
In addition to improvement of learning methods, parents are more sensible for their children's education. As a result, they try to provide up date ways for children's better learning. For instance, not only does my little brother learn a lot from games and other class references that are bought trough my parents, but he also finds some little errors in books and teacher's speaks. It is natural that other students similar to my brother do not relay on teaching boring materials only.
Last, observing new jobs by students and even other people in society may engage them for attentioning more to other occupations instead of teaching. From their view, these fields may offer more fascinating materials or bring more money and high position for them in life. To clarify, I exemplify my point with a true story about something which happened to me. When I was a high school student, I wanted to be a teacher. Upon becoming a senior student in university, I decided to be a chemist because of its interesting reactions. Now, I prefer to have a job with more money than be a laboratory researcher or even a professor with relatively low level of salary. As a result, the desire for being a teacher is becoming less among some people in society.
Overall, what drives some body to claim that teachers had high level of respect at past in contrast to recent years, may fall in to 3 main categories including less dependence to tutor, promotion in learning methods and emerging high level occupations in society. In spite of all mentioned facts,
It is advisable that we treat our children to cherish their teachers in any level of their educations more and more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: thorough
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Suggestion: Each
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Message: Did you mean 'somebody'?
Suggestion: somebody
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79565217391 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60820647587 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2175964763 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.105263158 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2105263158 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114336310626 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357250331814 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241581268538 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599393984512 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257548007051 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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